CheshireCat

This poem was very deep and I could feel the emotion in the writing. The word choice and sentence structure worked well with the poem. The only part I thought ...

This was very interesting and a touching story!!! I loved it! :) They paragraph about his sickness needs to be a little clearer and possibly add some more detail to ...

This story is really interesting! I can't wait to find out what happens next! :) There were some sentences with words that needed to capitalized. It's still really good and ...

This story is really interesting and a really clever idea. There are some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. Also there were some words that might have been mistyped in it ...

I love the story! The format feels like it is an actual journal. There were a couple times the word usage and sentence structure didn't flow well. "I never knew ...