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Thank you for the review! And I'll see about checking out that link; sorry, I'm fairly new here, and couldn't really find anything like that on my own, but yes, ...

Thank you!! :) And yeah, lol, that'll be explained, eventually. XD

Whoa... Okay! Here to write another review! :) First of all, the writing of this was very well done! It didn't feel rushed, and the choice of wording was excellent ...

So my impression from reading this was that a parent and son had a terrible fight, in which the parent (I couldn't tell if it was the mother or father) ...

Here to give a review! :) So first of all, I was deeply impressed by the way this was written. There was amazing detail, beautiful description, and the overall writing ...

Thank you!!! All criticisms are noted. :) And the book is actually completed, I'm just posting individual chapters here. So yes, their characters will be revealed in much detail. ;)

Hey! Thanks for the review!!! All criticisms are noted, and will be edited into the book as necessary! The book itself is actually competed; I'm just posting individual chapters. :) ...

Thanks for the review!! Yeah, I'm still working on editing every here and there, so thanks for the advice! %uD83D%uDC95%uD83D%uDC95 And ok, will change that typo in the draft. %uD83D%uDC4C ...

First off, thanks for the review! :) I've actually already written this entire book, so all the chapters are already written out. Yes, their background will be revealed quickly, the ...

Okay, first off, I enjoyed reading this. It was written in such a way that was fairly easy to understand, and it was very descriptive. :) The writing style is ...

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I was a little confused about the rhyming scheme, but I'm not a poet, so I don't really know which types of poetry are which. XD Anyway, this was very ...

I was a little confused about the rhyming scheme, but I'm not a poet, so I don't really know which types of poetry are which. XD Anyway, this was very ...