Chasmira1060

Brilliant imagery. A mournful story but beautifully told. Thanks for sharing!

Sorry, remembered a couple of small changes. First of all: "All she wanted now was for the darkness of death to to wrap her in the blanket of darkness" I ...

Aside from the grammatical fixes which others have pointed out, this was again a great read! I love how you describe her emotions. Thanks for this, and look forward to ...

Truly beautiful! I'm sure your girlfriend will appreciate. I love the metaphor of you being the sun who helps her, the moon, to shine and thrive and grow. And the ...

A very sweet poem, and clever; at first I thought you might be speaking of the death of a child, but I really like the human-like qualities you give to ...

Thanks very much, and glad you liked. It actually is a part of a longer work of mine, a book I've published called "The Silver Stag", but I like it ...

Beautiful language, lyrical and providing excellent visuals. Poetic even in its horror. Is this meant to reflect Snow White, by chance?

You published this? That's awesome! Yup, yup, this is only a part of my published book, glad you enjoyed this excerpt! ^_^