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Charmgirl1995

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: Take My Breath- Chapter 1 (and edited Prologue)

    Your story is intresting. I like how it pulls you in, the cliff hanger at the end was a good idea. Well done. I can't wait to read the next ...

    Aug 15, 2010

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General
    Re: The Scar

    This is an emotional poem that has feeling. Your rhyme scheme is good and you do an incredible job with it. Well done.

    Aug 15, 2010

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Bellatrix and Severus: A Love Story :smt055

    Ok, I think you should make Bellatrix a little more vain because thats how she is. And elaborate some more because I really want to read this story!!!

    Aug 15, 2010


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