Charmgirl1995
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Your story is intresting. I like how it pulls you in, the cliff hanger at the end was a good idea. Well done. I can't wait to read the next ...
Aug 15, 2010
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This is an emotional poem that has feeling. Your rhyme scheme is good and you do an incredible job with it. Well done.
Aug 15, 2010
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Ok, I think you should make Bellatrix a little more vain because thats how she is. And elaborate some more because I really want to read this story!!!
Aug 15, 2010
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