Charm

I won't :D I think the end should maybe be like, fade into the night or something. Like the main character fades into the night when they are dancing... I ...

Thanks :) It's part of a series called Sugar Sweet Tears (I say this because I lot of people don't realize xD )

Thanks for this review. It's actually part of a series of poetry which would be part of why you are confused, I have fixed it none the less.

Thanks for this review. It's actually part of a series of poetry which would be part of why you are confused, I have fixed it none the less.

Thank you :)

Nope :P

Thanks so much for this review :)

Thank you for this review!

Thanks so much for this review and yes, this is from my collection of poetry Sugar Sweet Tears. Honestly I didn't know how to end the poem because I wanted ...

Oh no! I understand completely. Just a little disappointed in myself.

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Thank you for this review. I understand that my poem needs a lot of work but I've never thought of it as bland or boring...

Thanks for the review :)

Thank you :)

Thank you