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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: A Self-Proclaimed Martyr

    No problem! :D

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thank you!

    Oct 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4

    Hmm...interesting...xD

    Oct 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4

    Please! Tell me your guesses! Those always make me laugh because they usually are far off, haha. Thanks so much for correcting my grammar. Yes, Seiko is my baby. I ...

    Oct 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thank you!

    Oct 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: basophilia

    No problem! XP

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: basophilia

    Love this poem so much omg! Seriously I need to read more of your work! but you nails slide between my brittle strands I think that's supposed to be your*

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    No I'm not offended lol (I used to get really upset at reviews with my poetry but I've done a lot of self reflecting. I've realized that not all criticism ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    The poem is a true story about my feelings for the past couple of months(?). I took a break from poetry and well now I'm back. I'm proud I at ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thanks for the review. I'm actually happy with my poem so I probably won't be changing much. I don't agree with many of the points you made but that's fine.

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thanks for this review. "Secondly, I think the scheme and meter of the poem could have been a bit more clear.." it's a free verse. Also "thousands of lives ago" ...

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thank you :)

    Oct 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: a quiet death

    aw thanks

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: do you remember like I do?

    Thanks!

    Oct 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 4

    you can subscribe to its club. that way you find out, i can't remember to tell you.

    Oct 20, 2016


You're given the form, but you have to write the sonnet yourself. What you say is completely up to you.
— Madeleine L'Engle, A Wrinkle in Time