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Even if I'm slow I will walk with my own feet, because I know this path is mine to take, I will never lose my dream.

  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Once More

    Thanks for this review!!! :)

    Feb 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thanks for the review. I put a comma there because 'of you' was supposed to be in the line above but it didn't fit. I can't grammar sorry xD

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    Thanks :)

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    Thank. This is free verse and not all poetry needs to rhyme.

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thank you!

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thank you! I think it will be my last really sad one for a while. I'm not very good at writing about anything else but the negative emotions.

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thank you! Also the whole rhyming thing xD That makes me laugh because I never rhyme in my poem and I don't even think about it. It sort of just ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thank you! I really wanted to write a poem about a little girl who had lost her innocence. I wanted it to seem childish with a dark background, thank you ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thank you! I have written a few other poems like this one. if you look on the blue column on the right side of the screen, it lists other poems ...

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: There Are Holes in Her Eyes

    Thanks! I still think it's trash though, hahaha. But don't all writers think their work is trash xD

    Feb 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    Thank you! I like your avatar and I am feeling better :)

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bottled Up Emotions

    Thank you

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    thanks

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    OMG. I'm had such a crappy day and you and so many people have made it better

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: It's My Fault

    Thank you

    Feb 3, 2016


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle