CharlotteS

I loved this. I think you captured perfectly how someone trapped inside their own mind feels. I love how you start with what you don't know, how someone/something in your ...

So I liked this poem. I think it didn't quite reach it's full potential though. It's length is fine and doesn't bother me but it's hard to read it as ...

Yes, thank you. I thought that Eliza was overreacting.

I liked this poem. It flowed nicely although it was rocky at times. Can I just say, when writing poems grammar doesn't matter. You need to start every line with ...

I liked this poem. It flowed nicely although it was rocky at times. Can I just say, when writing poems grammar doesn't matter. You need to start every line with ...