CharlotteGrace

I love this peice. The way you describe love is so realistic and relatable to people everywhere. You did by far the best at describing it.

Hey. There really isn't much left to say about the nick picking that the others haven't already said. I love the idea of it. The two boys being the reason ...

Hey. I loved this story it was simple an' sweet. I loved how she is overconfident about herself. You don't really see that anymore in the real world, so it ...

Okay. Thanks for the great feedback. I will definitly consider it in my next chapter. The way I spell things is very old english. I was raised by a history ...

Hey! Okay first off I want to say that it is a great story. I must agree with JC. Which is a good thing. -Charlotte Grace-

Hey and Welcome! I thought that you were brave to put up a journal entry, but you didi nothing to make it an actual story. It was kind of everywhere, ...

Hey! So this is my first time reading a Historical fiction story and I liked it a lot. I've always found the Elizabethean era quite fascinating. Charlotte Grace

Hey! I liked this a lot. I hope there's more!! -Charlotte Grace-

Hey, Lena! I liked this story but there was a lot of cussing. I understand though so don't change it at all! I liked it a lot. -Charlotte Grace-

Hey. I liked this story a lot. I loved the twist at the end! Keep up with the good work! -Charlotte Grace-

Hey! I agree with Roadnevertravelled. Did the guy die because the main character is quite grief stricken. I liked it a lot though. -Charlotte Grace

Hey! So I loved this but it was more like a excerpt of something rather than a short story. I think that the piece should be longer than that. Truth ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...

I liked it a lot. I thought the title was a little weird which is why I didn't read it sooner. Maybe just changet the title a bit, but that's ...