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Re: Ever Changing
There were some mistakes, as the others have stated, but I didn't like it very much. The description didn't pop out and let me draw a picture about the characters ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: Prophecy (Chapter one)
Hey! Charlotte here! I like the feel of the story. but I think it's going too fast. I mean that at the beginning you were talking about her walk to ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Forgotten (Part 1)
Hey! Charlotte Grace here! Okay let me start off that I have no idea where the story is going so far. I just thought you sould know that. I'm a ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 2
Hello again! So, I am even more confuzzled on this. Maybe it's just me missing something or I don't know but when did Murtagh and Isabelle date or court or ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Into the Depths Chapter 1 [Reworked]
Hey Eli!! So far I love the story. BUt I'm a little confused about a couple of things. 1. What time is this set in? It makes it really confusing ...
Sep 13, 2010 -
Re: Library Love Games (The Novel ch.1)
Hey ya'll! First of all I like the title. I'll spend hours at my local library writing. I just thought that was cool. Anyway I can totally relate to her ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Untitled - part 1
Hey AddictiontoFiction! Okay I love how it's set back in older times. I love period pieces (I've seen the Titanic over twenty times and cried each time) anyway I like ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Willow Creek 1.2
Hey ya'll! Okay so I absolutly love where the story is headed or at least where I think it's headed. . . Anyway I love that Halley is different from ...
Sep 12, 2010 -
Re: Do You Remember?
I loved it!! If I had tearducts I would have balled my eyes out. (Just pulling your leg.(About the tear ducts part not the part that said i loved it ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Twilight
Yeah same here. My friends and my cousins were talking about "how great the twilight series is and your weird if you've never read it." So I read it and ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: How To Make No Sense At All
Okay, first of all I love how you just exposed the raw truth of the subject. That is what made me so intrested at first. The second thing that popped ...
Mar 9, 2010
