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Channon

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Andrew & I

    Ignore inkwell. Well done, it's very good. =D Dissect your main idea of every line, then find the perfect precise wording to describe it. Keep it simple, don't use words ...

    Sep 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hate and Love

    Hey there!! :smt039 :smt039 :smt039 It was really good, it was cute.. maybe you intended it to have a deeper feeling :?: :?: Lots of people can relate to that.. ...

    Mar 26, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Invincible

    Incredible rhythm.. I would love to hear this sung. The only part that I didn't like was repeating the things you said. The content is amazing, at the places it ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: My Truth

    Okay, maybe I just didn't find this mind blowing because I cant wallow for something so small for so long. Have you read the Book Thief by Markus Zusack? The ...

    Nov 9, 2009


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