ChangeTheWorld

Thanks so much!

Aw shucks! Stop boosting my ego :)

definitely :)

well that was...

I really hope it helped! I was trying to make my thoughts coherent :) Good luck with grading!

The sucky thing is that in word this is a thirteen page short story, it's not a novel, and it's almost over, and the main conflict is in the next ...

ooooohhhhh. okay I'll check those

Hey thanks for the review darling!!! I'm confused on what you mean by speech marks? Like periods and punctuation?

That's what I thought but thanks for the clarification.

That's be interesting! almost like a mix of genres. That could be really cool :)

Thanks Malachi!

The point of that line is really evident in the fact that "sometimes I don't is crossed off" it's supposed to show that really it's not a sometimes thing so ...

It's called a stanza Mr. Ignoramus. ;)

Thanks so much!

Thanks so much! Yes it's the right form but way to look out for me ;) Thanks for the suggestions