ChalkyUknome

Hi there! Great poem! I think this could inspire more people to make a change in the world. It inspired me! I only came across one mistake: I want you ...

Hey there! This is a cool story. Please continue! I really like this and I'm sure others will too! That I have my little brother to take my mind of ...

Hi there! This is a very unique story. I've never read something like this before. I enjoyed this very much. When I finally turned around,choking, but the truth is that ...

Wow! I love how descriptive you are! And it's even cooler since you wrote that in 45 minutes! I don't really see anything wrong with this at all. But maybe ...

Hi there! I enjoyed this poem. And I'd run away from your love But I don't think that I can. I am strong enough to fall But am I strong ...

Hi there! I really liked this! Awesome monster! I did get confused with the third person to first person transition. I understand that you wanted to describe the monster and ...

Hello! I think this is a great idea! But I think you should add more detail. Espscially about Blade's childhood. The story seems to progress a little too fast. Try ...