Chairman

Thanks for critiques! *beams*

Okay, I'll critique it. And please don't keep on pushing your post - like, it's annoying me. I wish you could bring more elements to it, like having something that ...

Chill out. Life can be almost everything. You should expand it, and include your experiences. You should also use some quotes from Plato, Shakespeare or whatever. But it was inspirational ...

I'll have to say this was a good and (probably) accurate description and feelings in your Disney trip. With a few revisions this would be even better.

I think I know this guy. A user called Chairman posted the same post on my other critique board so I think I've recruited another member. Hurray! *nods head feverently*

Not bad...but it wasn't really good though. I would like to see some more originality...

Wow...really...wow. I never thought anything until the end. It is really so great...loved suspense

The whole thing is okay, and it's kind of good, but it's still kind of flawed with logical leaps and it's really..um, joycean prose.