ChadS

I really enjoyed this poem, the theme, and the imagery. I can see why you say our rhythmic and rhyme styles are similar, there are definitely similarities. One thing I ...

Well, the poem really doesn't have any continuity... really doesn't make sense to me. It's a decent poem, it is kind of entertaining and whimsical, but it needs some continuity ...

Great poem, I really like the emotions and the imagery. in the ruins of her own surrender; she breathed plumes of steam in the bitter Monday daybreak ; her body ...