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Hello and thank you! As this is draft one, I will definitely take your points and Shota's points into consideration for draft two of the prologue and chapter one. I ...

Thank you for the honesty!! I have always struggled with writing prologues, so I knew there'd be downfalls instantly. Now that I see someone else explain the weaknesses, I understand ...

Haha! :D Teenage love isn't the best when people try to ruin it. Currently I'm living a teenage love crisis but I hope all is good for you! :)

I wish I could do that :D I could edit for days and still find errors with my own work. Thank you, have a nice day, too!! :)