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Re: rambling flyers -- P13 for content
nice formation. just like a cross puzzle.
Jul 22, 2005 -
Re: Pulse
Cool. Why do u want to trash that?
Jul 17, 2005 -
Re: *My Only Made Up Song* Untitled (so far)
Is there a chorus part? If not, I want to say that it is kinda repetitive.
Jul 16, 2005 -
Re: I'm Your Friend
Uh... Just one correction. Shouldn't "look me in the eyes" be "look at me in the eyes"?
Jul 10, 2005 -
Re: Ann Ross ( a Cinderella Story) I
Funny how you worded your story, your style seems to vary as it goes on.
Jun 29, 2005 -
Re: Magic for Dummies
Grammar made your story horrible, but your story was funny.
Jun 29, 2005 -
Re: Rain Before Dawn, Chapters 1-4 (revised once again)
Your theme is crisp. Your characters dancing, dancing with current of plot that seemed to be trimmed with perfection. Your setting is a blast, crescendo and decrescendo that perfects the ...
Jun 26, 2005 -
Re: If Only
Ok. Sweet. congratulation on whatever you did. It was descriptive- very sensational. Your theme moved crisply, I can see.
Jun 26, 2005 -
Re: Things that dont calculate
Everybody needs a hug, you know. *hugs
Jun 23, 2005 -
Re: Recipe
Hey, are you crazy or joking. You read Harry Potter WAY TOO MUCH. LOL.
Jun 21, 2005 -
Re: (S)end
I liked your description, simple yet powerful.
Jun 21, 2005 -
Re: Niagara Movement Essay
Well. I liked the essay. However, it's not strong enough.
Jun 18, 2005 -
Re: The Pain Within
Well, sound like poem, but hey. Isn't song tell of a story and ?I think that would be called a poem.
Jun 18, 2005 -
Re: The Lights
Cool. Nice job with your uh... script. I uh... liked it? Yeah... I did...
Jun 16, 2005 -
Re: emotionless
Not bad :) . Well, sorry but I didn't get the last part? what does it mean? Why uh... the things have gone down to drain?
Jun 15, 2005