Ceylon

Your moral... YOUR MORAL!!!?? Well, it's okay. I have a strong moral, too. :wink: But you went little far in evolution thread when you said something bad against Jesus... But ...

Hello, what a day for me... Whoa(phases out)... Well, it was okay. However, I want to hear you make impacts but I can only hear you trying to force the ...

I was having one of my greatest days when "it" happened. I was 6th grade at that time. I woke up in 5 O'clock and jogged around the town a ...

Cool :D . Nice storyline. I love the way you made vivid images of the scenes- it flows like water. :wink: Two things that are turning me down are the ...

I LOVE the setting and general idea of the story; I found them very attractive and well-planned out (creative, too). :D First, never write any form of stories in chunky ...

I want to say that this uh... this brilliantly planned out story is 80% perfect. I believe this story have no grammatical error *cough* I think... All I can say ...

Wow, so much emotion. Well, the poem itself is very creative. You could have done a better job with the transition (line 4 to 5). It's really sudden and a ...

You didn't have any rhymes, did ya? But who cares about rhymes, your story was so REAL!!! :D :D :D

Hello~ :D I liked your story except the way you put the writing kinda annoyed me. Don't try to write the story in chunky paragraphs but in little tiny pieces. ...

Wow :o ... Just wow... I never EVER seen any writing like this before. I like your story line and how you worked out the dialogue(it sounded like you are ...