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CesareBorgia

  • Short Story » Horror, Literature Re: The Need To Kill

    Hi, it's Cessy, here for a review, This was a really good short story, and don't think I'm being biased because we're friends. This was a really good story. It's ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: .

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, I really liked this poem, because, for one thing, the title is amazing. It really tied me to the work. Another reason is because ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Endless Descent [Part 8]

    Hello CesarBorgia here for a review, I have to say that Mele is so compelled by Luci's kiss. :wink: It was very hard finding nitpicks in this part, but I ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: A Twins Hunt - A new Beginning (Chapter One)

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, This novel is so compelling and enticing. It's enthralling and confusing. Because it's confusing, it makes me want to read more. I walked through ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The Rhymic Reunion and Drumming Disaster (12 days before Christmas) [Part 11] *Edited*

    Hello CesareBorgia here for a review, Hi! I haven't read any other chapters of this novel, and I'm very confused, but this chapter was very interesting. :D It was Christmas ...

    May 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Other, General Re: My Name Is

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I actually really liked this. It was sort of poetic, but prose at the same time. It's really, really, good. I have some Nitpicks/Suggestions. ...

    May 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: True or False - the False Can Seem True

    Hey, CesareBorgia, here to review, I really liked this poem, it was a quick, easy and fun read. There are just some qualms that I have about this poem. To ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Eyes Wide Shut 3.3 (Edited)

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, Hey Deanie. I love this novel. I just haven't reviewed. I was also told I wasn't a good reviewer, so please tell me if ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Magic. Chapter 5

    Hello, CesareBorgia here for a review, This was a quick read, and I like that. But their are some qualms about it. I can tell you are a new writer, ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: As She Passed

    Hey, Cesare Borgia, here for a review, This was a very good poem, and I really liked it, but their are a couple of nitpicks. I was sipping my coffee ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Endless Descent [Part7]

    Hey Cesare here to review. Yes, I have been secretly reading this novel because it is so amazing. Here are the nitpicks. I pulled her in closer again and kissed ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Vampiric: Book Two, Chapter Four (Part Two)

    Hey Cessy here for a review, Oh my gosh. This is awesome. Amazing plot twist... Sirena's evil now... I'm a have to get used to this acomaddation(however you spell it). ...

    May 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Vampiric: Book Two, Chapter One

    Hey Cesare here for a review, So I loved the first Vampiric, and know you are writing another one...most writers on YWS haven't completed a series (I'm one of them), ...

    May 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: A World of Fears; Prologue

    Hey Cessy here for a review, I am soo not used to you writing short works, but then again, it is a prolouge. :wink: Yet I still loved this work... ...

    Apr 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Humor Re: Mitchell: Everyone Must Read

    Hey CesareBorgia here for a review, I love this work, because it makes me contemplate why I became a writer in the first place. Hello fuckfaced readers. I know I'm ...

    Apr 27, 2014


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