Celtichick3900

I like poetry like this. It's not angsty, just poignant and thoughtful. So much better than the "Black heart, blah blah, dark raven, blah blah, abyss" crap, you know what ...

Thanks, I'e never used this site and I wasn't sure how to edit it on here, But I figured it out. I took out a lot of the cursing, but ...

I revised some, you might want to try re-reading. I can't take it all out because I think the language is essential to the characters. I don't talk like that, ...