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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Alezrani Chapter 9

    Hey Idraa! *beam* Okay. I don't nitpick, because it gets boring for me after a while and creates tension for the writer whose piece I'm critiquing. But I will list ...

    Mar 19, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: BURN. *Book 1 of the Crows Peak series*

    Okay, Eilin, since you told me to review your novel, here I am. XD Okay, overally, it's okay, I suppose. It's not bad - I've seen a lot worse than ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Coma - excerpt

    Okay, since I've just rejuvenated, I'll give you the best review I can - what I'll say is this. It's not really good, but it's not bad either. It just ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Third Day - Chapter 1

    Okay, so a quickie review. (My head's spinning.) Honestly, Sop? I loved the idea of this story. However, what I didn't like - mostly because my head was - and ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: LoveBites Chapter 1

    Okay, plenty of grammar mistakes, so while I planned to go over each line by line, I couldn't. So let me start with the first paragraph - this is called ...

    Mar 7, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Talking Species

    Okay, so...:D I really, really liked the concept, but...the ow thing is, I was confused at first at what your protagonist's real difficulty was. He seemed to be able to ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: To Paint a Dance

    Loved this. A very in-depth look into the minds of two similar people. I especially loved it when the girl 'started changing the steps to the dance' - very poetic. ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Death of Fear is Only The Beginning...

    Hi Pal! Okay, I've never reviewed a poem before, so I don't really know how to go about this. Okay, so...um, well, it was really confusing, you could say. You ...

    Jan 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Nostalgia

    Hi Angels! What I wanted to say about this was - it was surreal. Anyone who knows me will tell you that I love a good dash of surrealism, and ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The road not taken. *Edited*

    Hi Kaka! Well, I really liked the theme of the story, for one thing, maybe because I relate to it so much. Your MC gets her thoughts across very emotionally, ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore

    -shrieks in laughter- Ahahahaha! -snort- That was one of the best fanfics in the site I've seen so far. While some of the comments directed by Patricia to certain teachers ...

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Rose in the Snow(Revised)

    I really liked this, especially when we realised that Nicholas was her son and not her lover, like I had originally thought. I also loved the images you put into ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Discovery

    Okay...this was definitely brilliant. And I mean it. Not many pieces here (or elsewhere) deal with the perspective of a two year old so very descriptively. There were no faults ...

    Jun 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Walking Dead - Chapter 1 [EDITED]

    Hey Kyou! ^^ This must be the story you were telling me about, no? I really liked it, but the grammar and all that were a bit jarring, so maybe ...

    Apr 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: FREAK

    Snoink, this was great. I read through the whole thing, and I liked it very, very much. The characters are pretty dynamic, and even if we don't really know much ...

    Feb 26, 2010


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