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Re: Alezrani Chapter 9
Hey Idraa! *beam* Okay. I don't nitpick, because it gets boring for me after a while and creates tension for the writer whose piece I'm critiquing. But I will list ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: BURN. *Book 1 of the Crows Peak series*
Okay, Eilin, since you told me to review your novel, here I am. XD Okay, overally, it's okay, I suppose. It's not bad - I've seen a lot worse than ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Coma - excerpt
Okay, since I've just rejuvenated, I'll give you the best review I can - what I'll say is this. It's not really good, but it's not bad either. It just ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: The Third Day - Chapter 1
Okay, so a quickie review. (My head's spinning.) Honestly, Sop? I loved the idea of this story. However, what I didn't like - mostly because my head was - and ...
Mar 10, 2011 -
Re: LoveBites Chapter 1
Okay, plenty of grammar mistakes, so while I planned to go over each line by line, I couldn't. So let me start with the first paragraph - this is called ...
Mar 7, 2011 -
Re: The Talking Species
Okay, so...:D I really, really liked the concept, but...the ow thing is, I was confused at first at what your protagonist's real difficulty was. He seemed to be able to ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: To Paint a Dance
Loved this. A very in-depth look into the minds of two similar people. I especially loved it when the girl 'started changing the steps to the dance' - very poetic. ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Death of Fear is Only The Beginning...
Hi Pal! Okay, I've never reviewed a poem before, so I don't really know how to go about this. Okay, so...um, well, it was really confusing, you could say. You ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia
Hi Angels! What I wanted to say about this was - it was surreal. Anyone who knows me will tell you that I love a good dash of surrealism, and ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The road not taken. *Edited*
Hi Kaka! Well, I really liked the theme of the story, for one thing, maybe because I relate to it so much. Your MC gets her thoughts across very emotionally, ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: It's The Muggle Way, Dumbledore
-shrieks in laughter- Ahahahaha! -snort- That was one of the best fanfics in the site I've seen so far. While some of the comments directed by Patricia to certain teachers ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: The Rose in the Snow(Revised)
I really liked this, especially when we realised that Nicholas was her son and not her lover, like I had originally thought. I also loved the images you put into ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Discovery
Okay...this was definitely brilliant. And I mean it. Not many pieces here (or elsewhere) deal with the perspective of a two year old so very descriptively. There were no faults ...
Jun 2, 2010 -
Re: Walking Dead - Chapter 1 [EDITED]
Hey Kyou! ^^ This must be the story you were telling me about, no? I really liked it, but the grammar and all that were a bit jarring, so maybe ...
Apr 24, 2010 -
Re: FREAK
Snoink, this was great. I read through the whole thing, and I liked it very, very much. The characters are pretty dynamic, and even if we don't really know much ...
Feb 26, 2010
