CelticaNoir

Should all stories have a beginning? But this isn't one. To me, it's the story, the only one, mine. But I have a beginning. And an end. Stories will just ...

Okay. So. I'm going to collect my thoughts here a little, and tell you exactly what I thought of it. First off, the introduction wasn't bad--the idea of 'monsters of ...

Celt reviewing and read for duty! :D So. I liked it a lot, especially the fact that you wrote a story into a poem form. However, there were a few ...

Well, here I go. :) Okay, wasn't half-bad. But it was a tad disappointing for me, since it's more of a idea than a real story. And even though it ...

Okay, well, let's see. I really, really loved this story idea, and I think it's got a lot of potential, especially considering that this genre is rather overused. However, a ...

Okay, so I'm not really good at reviewing poems. But I'm determined to do my best today, so here it is! :P Okay. I really liked the theme of the ...

Okay. While I really like this idea, there are a few nitpicks I have: For one, while your spelling was pretty good, some of your grammar and punctuation threw me ...

Okay, so, where do I start? -_- While I loved your idea, and your dialogue was a fresh change from some of the stories I've been reviewing all day, it ...

Hey Cairo. Okay, so...what can I say? :P It wasn't bad, but I felt the action was a tad bit slow at times. I'm more of a get-hooked-in-five-paragraphs kind of ...

Hey Teardrop. :) Okay, I have to say that this could've been fairly good, except I felt that your description was really awkward and your dialogue a little - no, ...

I loved this! :) I loved that you set this in Italy; the first paragraph, especially, sounds rather authentic. Also, lipstick bombs? Awesome. XD I thought your character was a ...

I think this is really good, but you could do with a few overall grammar and spelling checks. A few lines could do with some work, and you could describe ...

Hey One! :) I really loved this piece; it actually came across as well-thought-out, unlike some stories I do happen to come across now and then. (Don't ask.) I did ...

Hi Aqua! :D Sorry, I'm probably reaaaaally late with this review. But anyway, let's see here... I loved this chapter. It gives off a very Victorian-ish edge, at least to ...

Okay, okay, I finally got to this review. XD Anyway. From what I've read so far, I think this has a lot of potential, and you're really good at this ...