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Re: The Everlasting Tree
I love this story. It's very short but I think that works with this. However, I do think if you did a little more showing and not just telling that ...
Mar 31, 2016 -
Re: Silence - Medieval Jacksepticeye fanfiction - Chapter #1
This has a really good plot and I love the diction choices you made for Mrs. O'Conner. It really strengthens her sense of existence in this story. However, there were ...
Mar 31, 2016 -
Re: Schizo
The truth of this is amazing. I got goose bumps reading it. This peice has a very strong and clear voice. Absolutely stunning. However it does leave me wondering what ...
Mar 26, 2016