CatInTheShower

My dearest b00kthi3f, Again, I reach out to you, a stranger across the void we know as the Internet. Like I've said before, perhaps we have met in another life? ...

My dearest b00kthi3f, I have a feeling I have seen something of this before. Perhaps we met in a dream and you showed me this piece? I remember the cold, ...

Although this genre wouldn't be my first choice, I was moved by your piece. It's gripping and emotional. The final line really does put the cherry on the cake. It's ...

Dear B00kthi3f, I'd first like to welcome you to YWS! :P I think that your piece is spectacular. The descriptions used really create a tense, and at times eerie atmosphere. ...

Really makes me think about the desserts I've enjoyed, and the smaller "people" who enjoyed them before me! It's cute, humorous and flows well from one line to the next. ...

Before I begin, I don't want you to feel insulted by my opinion. I apologise if I criticise too much. I don't like giving criticism. I'm also not a poet ...

I really enjoyed your piece! I feel that it gives a true insight as to the struggles that any writer, whether it's stories, poetry or script, feels when beginning. The ...