CastlesInTheSky

Thanks Demeter ! That was so helpful. Thankyou. xxx

Thanks so much Jasmine. Phew, I was really worrying about whether the characters were believable or not. Yep, I"ll PM you for sure.. xx

[b]Aww thankyou Shannon :D Yep I'll be sure to look out for your reviews. *cries with happiness* Yay! I get reviews! :smt005 :backtotopic: In England, Year Seven is the equivalent ...

Thankyou so much for your input, jasmine12. Haha, who's Pete. Now that did make me laugh :lol: I love reviews with a bit of humour thrown in. Glad you like ...

Thanks for all the lovely compliments and criticsm, jasminerose. Oh so did you get bullied as well? I was for a period of time, and that is what helped me ...

[b]Thankyou so much for your comments, lyricalsunshine, I am reviewing the cliched beginning as we speak. Do you suggest cutting out the whole beginning and starting with the bit in ...

Once again, Thankyou, Chiranthra :D Have reviewed the whole ischemic stroke thing. Now, it's not the car accident that causes the stroke, it's the stroke causing the car accident, seeing ...

Thankyou so much TGLWooster :D Your criticisms were helpful as well as making me laugh, and yeah, I will get rid of tags. I seem to have a really bad ...

Oh, how sad. You are right, it takes a sad twist. Well, I suppose you are getting better. No mistakes as far as I can see. This time you only ...

Reviews please? Thankyou

Hello again, Castlesinthesky. Hello to you :D Oh, about the "Year Seven", it doesn't mean seven year old :lol: , it means like Grade 7, that's what we say for ...

Thankyou Chiranthra :D Yep, I'll be sure to review the spacing.

Again, thanks very, very much, aspiringwritertobe, And thanks for posting something about my work in the lounge, but it really, really doesn't deserve to be there at all, I mean, ...

[b] Awww, thanks, aspiringwritertobe for your review. It really made me smile, I thought for a moment I was never going to get any review (: Thanks a lot, I'm ...

Could I please have some critique/reviews please? I posted before and no-one's reviewing :( and it makes me really depressed. Okay, an over-exaggeration there. Not meaning to nag. Thanks so ...