Cassie9960

Thanks for the advice!

I loved it! This is my third time to read it! Why won't you write any more? Please do soon. Okay, bye!

Thanks everyone except RENA!!!! I don't think I'll continue my story, my spirits were kind of crushed. For everyone who actually wanted to read this story, it was going to ...

I loved it!!! You were really good with describing. PLease PLease Please write more soon!!!!! Cassie

Who was the main character? And was it a girl or a boy? I was confused. I didn't like it at all. (Sorry if this is harsh)

I liked it, alot. You need to write the fourth one soon!! I am anxious to see her reaction.

this is a prolouge type thingy.

I liked it. The person before me already got to the nit picks so there is nothing really that I have to talk about. OKAY, so i guess keep up ...

You need to write another chp. please. it is killing me.

ATTENTION TO ALL WHO READ THIS< I WENT BACK AND ADDED MORE TO ChP.2. SO RE-READ THE END OF THAT TO GET THE BEGINNING! Cassie was here!

Chp.3 is up and ready to go!!!!!!!! Please read it I hope you enjoy it! I worked on this one and I tried to leave you hanging. Happy writing!! CASSIE ...

i didn't really like it that much. I was kinda good but I thought it would be an actual story. You know?? Oh well, and you didn't really explain if ...

I thought it was kinda stupid. Why would someone fall asleep after 3 seconds with their eyes closed. And you used Ugh way to much. it was like Ugh this ...

To Classy Callie will become more important and aware of herself in the next chapter. Just give the story a little time and it will get better. Casssie

Honestly, I didn't like it. Why? I HATE stuff about death. It made me feel sad.