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Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Season 2: Episode 9, End Of Shader Part 3 of 3
Very nice! I don't completely understand what's going on yet, mainly just because I haven't gotten to read the other chapters of this series yet, but it seems pretty good ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 8
Aww, how sad. Poor John and Brian. D: It's very emotional, and I like it a lot. Being able to make your readers feel things is important. Good job! Be ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Diamond of the Lost Soul 5
Very interesting! Nice and poetic. You've got some punctuation troubles, though. Be sure to put the right punctuation at the ends of your sentences (question marks for questions, even if ...
Feb 23, 2014