Carmina

O.k. I went back and read all the the chapters to this point. They didn't answer my questions quite as I had hoped. I think there is too much space ...

I liked this story. I thought it was funny. The random twists were great. It was odd and off-beat. Cool.

I like the imagery. Ah, fleeting life. By bringing up the crow, are you alluding to Native American mythology and the crows role in the life and death? Or is ...

One correction: "idealist" is a noun. "Idealistic" is adjective. Aside from that: I am, "civil as an orange. And something of that jealous complexion." (place the quote if you can. ...

Its a cute little quatrain. No idea for a title. Maybe just name it after your favorite place to go fishing.

Thank you all for commenting. Q, you asked where the idea for the masks came from. I do ceramic sculpture. I was having writer's block and was looking around for ...

Upbeat is good. There is not enough of it these days.

Gosh that's upbeat.

This is response to Duskglimmer. I know I didn't say what it was that happened. I was wondering when someone would say something about that. I like ambiguity. I know ...