Published October 19, 2005
If you have any suggestions for a title, I'd like to hear them.
I stand along the shoreline,
The fish quake with fear,
For they can see me casting,
And they know why I'm here.
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Its a cute little quatrain. No idea for a title. Maybe just name it after your favorite place to go fishing.