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Re: The White Room (Warning: Graphic Imagery)
Wow, that was intense. Its got so many elements of horror. Elements of Absence The Unknown The Unexpected The Unstoppable The Unseen Elements of Presence Helplessness Pressure Intensity Release All ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: [Deleted]
Great poem. The Line: And sometimes a land in drought Obtains the gentle water's spray Its the perfect way to show the good and bad sides of love. The way ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: The Soccer Locker
Awesome idea, very original. I think you should use more imagery and descriptions. Take more time explaining the main character, the bus, the school, the ride in the locker, what ...
Oct 6, 2009