Cannonball

For ladymarmalade: Thank you ! :)

For Evenslily: That's my english; i haven't used google translator and my first language is Italian and not english. :) Thank you for Nitpicks and for your compliments. :)

Thanks! :) Very kind. :) Yeah, i've chanced direction at the end and for a while, I started to speak in the first person. This was because this change improve ...

Nice work :)

Very nice work. I really like how the feeling is so powerful and strong. Clear words and courage in expressing them. It's great.

ahah so strange.

Amazing. :)

Thanks ! :) I'm happy that you have enjoyed that! :D Good writing ! :D

Thanks. :) Yeah.. it's difficoult for me translate it in italian, because i use a high italian language, and i'm not so good in english to translate it very well ...