Callista

This sounds like it has potential :D Let me just give you a few suggestions. Who is the voice of the forest? If this is the first part of the ...

Hi! You gave me such a nice review on my demon brothers story that I thought I'd do the same for you! I liked this first chapter. It's a lot ...

Wow, a sad christmas story... :( I couldn't find much wrong with this, either. I got kind of confused with the constant jumping around, though, and the paragraphs could be ...