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Re: Oracle of Life 2 pt 1
This sounds like it has potential :D Let me just give you a few suggestions. Who is the voice of the forest? If this is the first part of the ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.1) [newly edited]
Hi! You gave me such a nice review on my demon brothers story that I thought I'd do the same for you! I liked this first chapter. It's a lot ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: A Fall from Grace
Wow, a sad christmas story... :( I couldn't find much wrong with this, either. I got kind of confused with the constant jumping around, though, and the paragraphs could be ...
Dec 21, 2009