Callaticgirl

Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hazy Days
Your use of figurative language is very good, I especially like this part, "Shooting stars pour onto us, Forming a garden between our footsteps. " This is a very surreal ...
Dec 19, 2007

What orators lack in depth they make up for in length.
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