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Re: heartburn (heart burns)
ahh thank youu
Feb 20, 2024 -
Re: according to zeno's paradox
Hello Em16! I definitely see what you're saying with the disconnection between certain lines; I think I could improve the cohesion in the poem overall. Thank you for the feedback!
Jun 13, 2022 -
Re: according to zeno's paradox
Hi erilea, thank you for the review!! I appreciate your comments and feedback, especially about the fragility of a machine in the ocean and considering which lines could use more/less ...
Jun 13, 2022