Cailey

Commas, got it. Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!! :D

No clue why the formatting got so messed up. Sorry!

Awesome! Thanks for pointing those out. I guess this story needs a bit more work. :) I just typed it to get it out, since it was begging to be ...

Hm, more about the house? I like it. If I ever get around to adding to this I will be sure to add more about setting. Thanks!!

Thank you!!

Thank you!

I wish I had a nice review for you. But to be honest my first impression is speechless, and I don't have the time to keep rereading until I have ...

Yeah, that's kind of how I was feeling. But don't believe it! After writing this I got two people who read my novel and really liked it, so there's always ...

Hm, I hadn't thought of that. That there shouldn't be so many because of writer's block... That's a really good point, thank you tons for mentioning it!

Isn't it true though, in writing, that sometimes you miss something? I'm working on a novel, and the pieces are all over the place in my brain, notebooks, word documents. ...

I don't know. It was fading, and now coming back... I'm just a mess and having such a terrible time with my novel. :( But thank you for the review. ...

Formatting was a mistake. It wasn't supposed to look like that, and the line was an accident. But thanks for the review!

Thank you!!! This was great, it made me feel awesome, I love reviews like this, though they aren't always helpful about how to improve. Still, thanks tons!

Hey, thanks for the review!!! So, the line there was a mistake with the spacing and such. it wasn't supposed to be there. And there were a lot more breaks. ...

Thank you so much! I love getting comments like this, they're super encouraging and awesome. I'll see what I can do to make the first stanza more than just blah ...