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That makes sense! I wondered if maybe it was something like that. :) I see it now, and it fits well. Yeah, I usually don't repost after I edit something. ...

No worries, you weren't harsh. :) I kind of scrapped this one and have started over with the essay, but a lot of the things you said will be really ...

Thank you for the review!! I'm really glad you liked it. To clear things up a bit: Olive is the typewriter. (I really meant to do more with the typewriter, ...

Thank you for the review. Yeah, I was wondering what to do about the other people living in the house. I don't know why in the world I didn't think ...

Awesome, thank you! I will take your advice and read some of Virginia Woolf's stories. I certainly need some practice working through how to write with streaminess. :D

Thank you! Yeah, I've noticed a few more typos after I posted it. :) But thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked it.

Awesome! Thanks! Hopefully I'll get back to this and fix up the typos.

I don't have time to review, and I wish I did since this deserves a review, but it looks like you got some at least already. But this was really ...

Thank you so much!

I think that's the beauty of poetry. You can misinterpret it entirely and it can still mean something to you. (though Nether, I think you're the only one who caught ...

Thanks!!!!

Thanks tons for the review!!

Awesome, thanks! I'll try and get around to fixing that typo!!

Thanks! And will do. :D

Thanks for the review! Yeah, I changed the fonts as much as I could so you could tell them apart. :D