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Re: The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare
Happy Review Day! I know I shouldn't start off with a warning, but for some reason I am really tired today and having a really hard time focusing. I'll try ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Family
Hello! Happy Review Day! I just want to start off by saying that this reminded me a ton of Lilo from Lilo and Stitch, and I kept thinking "ohana means ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Guess What!
Hello! Cailey here with a review day review. I have to say the reference of drugs and I think you mentioned humor drew me to the poem. And I didn't ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 3 Part 3
Hey, last review, and for some reason I'm exhausted so I hope I can figure out how to say what I'm trying to say. I know you had the proper ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 3 Part 2
Happy Review Day! I'll start by just writing down some things as they come up and then give a more overall review at the end. Why is he lacking a ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 3 Part 1
Hey there! Cailey here to give you a review day review. I know I read all the parts of another chapter of this book, so it's really exciting to go ...
Feb 23, 2014 -
Re: Razorblades
Hello! Cailey here with a review! I love the way this drew my mind back and even if this wasn't my memory it was enough to make me remember similar ...
Feb 20, 2014 -
Re: Smiles
Hello! Cailey here with a review. I should start by saying that this poem made me smile and I am still smiling. I wasn't at the beginning, and then part ...
Feb 19, 2014 -
Re: Sunrise to Sunset, The Stick and Stone
Hey there! Here to review this poem for you! So I really like the way you cover all of life in just this poem. And while that is something that's ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Memories
Hello! Cailey here with a review. Although I have to admit I'm not entirely sure how to review this, since other can be anything you want, really. I think you ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 2 Part 4
Hey, so is this the last part of the chapter? Because it seems like a kind of abrupt ending. The girl still hates him and the Captain is mad at ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 2 Part 3
Hey there, back with another review. I didn't review part two because you'd already gotten two reviews there, but I read it and don't have too much to say. It ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Machine City Chapter 2 Part 1
Hello! Happy Review Day!' I noticed that you have a lot of parts of this story in the Green Room, so hopefully I can get some of them reviewed for ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: I love you too.
Hey! Happy Review Day! I have the hardest time writing sonnets, so props to you for accomplishing one! I really like the theme of this whole poem, because I agree ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Noose
Hey there! Happy Review Day! I just wanted you to know that your title was great. Short, simple, and when I noticed it I had to read this poem to ...
Jan 26, 2014
