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I really I liked this story, it was fun to read. It kind of reminds me of the movie mean girls, but a little less brutal and a bit more ...

This is a really good story. It seems very, sort of, fast passed even though the setting is rather mundane, and the situation isn't all that uncommon. The only question ...

Wow this is awesome. I love the way it flows and fits together like it does. :) but on this part "I was exhausted by the, but Riley hadn’t slowed ...

This is great. I'm not good with pointing out grammatical errors or things like that, but as far as I see there aren't any. I like how your prologue is ...

This is a beautiful poem. I'm not good at writing poetry myself, but I like reading it. What I see. what I feel when I read this is a girl, ...

This is a great story, real interesting. But I think in some places its a little rushed. I love the description of the truck, and Rory's attitude in the beginning ...

First thing's first, When I first found this story, in the Novels & Novellas section, it only lists the fourth chapter, so I accidently read that first. :) you might ...

That was really cool :) I can't wait for you to write more. But like other people have pointed out the whole "magical button-like thing" breaks the mood, and the ...