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Re: One Way Out- Chapter One
Sweet! And wow.....she sure is one angry girl. But the way you describe her feelings towards her parents- the words, the body language, is absolutely spot-on. I love the free ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: Strawberry Hearts -6-
Wow. This is amazing. I loved the ending. Your description of the scene with Mrs. Darrison is nice and free-flowing. The start about missing and wanting to know and everything ...
Oct 30, 2014 -
Re: Secret of the One- Chapter 4.1
It is beautiful. Personally, I love it and wouldn't change a thing. Your language is great, and it succeeds in making the entire plot come to life before the reader's ...
Oct 29, 2014