ButterFlyInk

I saw the movie yesterday and it followed the book really well. It was awesome to watch, as for the books I adore them even though it has been about ...

Its Absolutely amazing. So different...I love it :) Just wondering..... where did you get your inspiration to write this? So good...i hope there is more of this *crosses fingers and ...

Aww, Meep. :( You had me in tears. No joke. *pulls out hankie* This is the shortest thing I've ever read that has made me tear up; it was executed ...

Most horror stories and movies nowadays have either creepy little girls or dead little girls. Something orginal like the teenage boy with no eyes or man with no face is ...

Her books are better because her vampires are actually dangerous -- as in they actually kill people -- and don't sparkle in the sunlight. Plus, while she's a bit wordy, ...

To me there seems to be an essence of Edgar Allen Poe's Tell Tale Heart, maybe as a inspiration for the piece?(I don't know maybe its just me *shrugs*) As ...

I loved it. It was beautifully written,and it was captivating. I know the subject matter, so it doesn't bother me. I'm not a moderator or anything but, you'll probably be ...

I found it interesting, I have a weak stomach so it was kind of hard to read the gore but I liked it. This is a very interesting story you ...

Where's the rest? *looks under the bed* *looks in the kitchen cupboards* I wanna know where the rest of the story is.. This piece is strange but interesting, and yes ...

I think you should turn this into a t.v show for kids! Cause when I was reading this I felt like I was actually watching on of those kid shows ...

"Hey eyes." Caleb replied. = "Her eyes." Caleb replied. for me that's the only mistake I can see, might because I'm half asleep trying to read with blurry eyes :P ...

I loved it *thumbs up* XD I think instead of her father just saying I'm having an affair he could say : " I can't believe I'm having an affair". ...

"I didn’t feel safe telling my “secret” to anyone but I felt safe with him, it was scaring me." Like horsefreak said, this sentence doesn't flow right. You could try ...

I love how you have captured the essence of the audience's reaction: I snap my fingers and the sound rings I say its gone but you don't believe I open ...

2 thumbs up is all I can say :D ...I think you should use this as a prologue...buts thats just my opinion cause with the way part one ended it ...