Burrow

wow.... what i just read, its umdescribable, it was amazing, i loved the hole thing, how you wrote, it made me so sad, and what you wrote about it made ...

Thanks for the huge review, im going to go straight into making my sentances better:)

Thanks, i will get to fxing those mistake staright away!!

Wow, there is nothing i can say that wasnt written in the other reviews but other wise, this is a great story. Thumbs up!!! Jack

Yeah, I do that do, but either way its a great story, it just makes it easier to read. Jack

Thankyou!!

I like this... a lot thumbs up!!! Jack

Thanks a heap for the review, I agree with everything you say except for the bit with Mason, I decided to but as little info on him, make them wonder ...

I love it, its keeps getting better, PLEASE WRITE MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks, I did think about red writing it again, and I might a bit later, but I'm in the middle of writing a new story about 20 000 words in ...

Well I really love your idea, and you seem to be developing it well, better than I could, I love your different characters and your storyline makes me want to ...

and also it does start to change later on with thinks I have wrote for this

Yeah I agree with you, I did drag on a bit, I have been thinking of starting the story again... what to you think?

yeah, I wrote that a while ago, I have actually started using these "on later storys

its ok, I still loved the story, can you please tell me if you plan to write more?