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Re: Antithesis
As I said before I love details to a certain extent. When I feel like detailing everything I write about I do it but usually I prefer to leave everything ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Four Men Poem
Nooo they weren't completely wrong. It's what I would prefer, my own style of writing but you don't need to scrap everything and write how I would if you can't ...
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Antithesis
Thanks alli for the review. Yeaaa it would have been soo much better if it cycled to morning.
Sep 17, 2020 -
Re: Nature Poem
Np bro
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Nature Poem
May you be blessed by the eternal inspiration hunting grounds !
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Nature Poem
I hate giving too much detail like what trees are found. Sorry but I really feel that much detail will replace this magical atmosphere I am looking to make
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: Nature Poem
Oh, could have sworn it was sewn. Welp my bad
Sep 16, 2020 -
Re: The Purge
Oooo I got it now.
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: The Purge
Is it a good effect or a bad one? I am confused.
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Antithesis
Oh and I never get offended by anyone's opinion as long as it is strictly related to my poem. When it strays off and tries to mess with my personal ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Antithesis
Oof you didn't understand the essence. It's all about contradictions, antithesis: furious-calm crowded-lonely
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Antithesis
I am pretty content with "cheap pen", but I agree that "early i wasn't born" is a little too basic and lacks that poetic feel. I will think of some ...
Sep 15, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
Ikr, our country was really harmed during that time, every one that was hella smart and good at what he is doing was imprisoned. That is why those inmates were ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: Lullaby
Oh Radu Gyr is a romanian poet, that wrote in prison during communism. There was a ban on anything that promoted own choices and beliefs, poetry was banned too. His ...
Sep 14, 2020 -
Re: The Purge
Aww thanks
Sep 14, 2020
