BunnyBot8

I also don't know what this is based off of, but I have a few things to say. First of all, even if the reader doesn't know what your referencing, ...

I like this but there are a few mistakes. The first thing you messed up was how you say I. You don't capitalize I so that is one grammar mistake. ...

I really like this. The whole story of someone thinking that they are invisible because they think no one cares for them is a great story line (even if that ...

I love this script. I think it has a lot of potenial with making this into a movie of sorts. You had one mistake that I don't even know if ...

I thought that this was a fairly good script. I think that if this was to become something else, then you should introduce all of the new things slowly so ...