Bugslake

Thanks, I am glad you like it. I was actually not goin to keep going with this because it wouldn't get reviews, and when it did some were very nasty ...

Thanks, as I had told everyone else, this wasn't even supposed to be posted. I'm editing the second chapter, it's taking a while. Again thanks for the review.

Thanks and as I've said before, this was lying around with no editing done. I just through it up here to see if it was a good story.

Thanks, I work on the dialogue. This part had been written for a while, I just decided to post it. I will try to get the second part written and ...

Thank you, I'm sorry about the missing letters and distracting sentence. It was really late and most of it was spelled majorly incorrect, but I had edited it before I ...

Alrighty

I respect an honor you and your opinion on this subject. I completely agree with you and the examples you gave. May God bless you.

I understand.

Alright.

Thank you so much, you completely see where I'm coming from. I will definitely write more, even if it is just for you.

I'm sorry, but that's not exactly what the story is about. You took this prologue at a completely different viewpoint than me, but your opinion is yours and I'll respect ...

I'm sorry, but that's not exactly what the story is about. You took this prologue at a completely different viewpoint than me, but your opinion is yours and I'll respect ...

Yeah, I understand there isn't much. That's the point of a prologue though, to give you a background of where the character is and why things are the way they ...

Thank you so much. I guess you understood what I was tying to say by putting in the part where Darius comments Kiere waking up.

Great cant wait to rea more.