Bugslake

I am ping to fix this.

Yeah it's terrible, I was just getting the idea down then I will completely rewrite it a little later.

The part one of chapter one is out.

I will definitely let you know when the rest of it is posted. I'm glad you like it.

If you had read the prologue it would've made more sense, but I will definitely take your grammatical advice.

Thank goodness because I have had plenty if people get really mad at me and I only wanted to help.

That would be nice ;)

This is really good. Nice prologue I just wih that there was a little bit more.

There will always be grammar mistakes when it comes to me. I do have to say though, this is the best prologue I've written and it is funny because this ...

Goodness, I was only trying to give pu some pointers. I was only trying to help and yes I admit I have the same problem but people on this website ...

Thanks. I will keep those things in mind. That is slightly the reason I don't want to write in third person, but I'm going to go for it.

This will almost be like a written biogragraphy. Most of the story will be in quotes with the narrator talking here and there. I have to fix it so that ...

Thanks for the review. Didn't know it was so bad that it took review day to get a second review. I kind of gave up the work anyways, but thanks ...

Alright. Will do. Her major blow up chapter is almost done. I'm still thinking about his POV and the beginning of the end for him.

Thanks. I'll be writing in Jax's POV after chapter four. He'll give more description on the fight.