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Re: Death And A Scraped Knee.
This is great freestyle poetry! I love the deep symbolism and meaningful imagery. This poem is really good at portraying difficult emotions and troublesome times. However, I would suggest adding ...
Dec 16, 2024 -
Re: Clover reunites with lost loved ones (and more)
The story is written so well! It is easy to follow and the characters were every interesting. My only suggestion would be to provide more information about the characters and ...
Nov 19, 2024 -
Re: Serena’s story
This story follows so well and is very cohesive! I like how much it is easy to follow. I never had to reread to understand what was happening and it ...
Nov 19, 2024