BrumalHunter

Salutations, Tort! I would have marked this as a review, but I'm unsure what site policy is on rereviewing a piece that hasn't undergone major editing, so I'll leave a ...

Okay, phew. That's good to know. XD That article was indeed useful! I'm planning on writing a fanfiction and finishing it, for once - though it won't be done anytime ...

Better late than never indeed! And that is a wonderful reaction, from an author's point of view. :P Although you're right in that I'm not a "romance dude", I am ...

1.1 Okay! I'll just run it by others and check existing reviews to be sure. 1.2 Ross actually means "Red", though. :P 1.3-1.5 ...I just realised I implied a lie. ...

PS: The description at 1.3 is supposed to read: "I dislike endless 'laundry list' character descriptions. For example: 'She had eyes the color of a summer sky and long blonde ...

Another epic review, yay! Thank you for commenting on the same matters as the others, since receiving the same feedback from multiple people proves they're on to something. 1.1 Haha, ...

I usually respond to my reviews, even when I've discussed the matter with a person in private. I usually respond to responses to my responses as well, so you ought ...

Salutations, Carina! I never say "OMG", but... OMG, thank you so much! I wasn't expecting a review from you at all, so this totally made my day. And yeah, I ...

You're welcome! I apologise if my advice seemed a bit harsh at places. If anything was too vague, do ask for clarification, and I'll be happy to oblige.

Aww, thank you!

For posterity: discussion continued in private. *cheers* Ah, Buggie, I am so glad you loved the short story! And I'm just as glad you're emotional, even if it's only because ...

Yes, welcome! 1.1 It doesn't reveal too much about you, really, since everybody would pick someone , which in the end would show which they valued more: kindness, loyalty, or ...

(I'm sorry for the passive-aggressiveness in the conclusion; it's a pet peeve of mine when Americans correct British English in ignorance, but that's no reason to be snappy about it.)

For posterity: discussion continued in private. 1.1 Sure? This is valid critcism, but I don't think I can do much about it but say, "Okay, thanks" for now. I'll keep ...

PS: The "%u2013" is supposed to be an en dash (because I can't write an em dash using a numberpad shortcut), so just mentally replace it with a "-" when ...