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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pie Rats

    I really liked this poem. I enjoyed the way it was written and the humour of it. It was amazing and I can find no problems in it. Overall, I ...

    Oct 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suffocating

    I think this poem is amazing. The punctuation really gave a great effect to the overall poem and made it much more dramatic. It was a great poem and I ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I'm sure

    I found this poem excellent. It flows quite nicely and is well written. I can't find anything in this poem that could be improved. You did a wonderful job.

    Jun 3, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: with out you

    Wow. That is very beautifully written. The wording is amazing and it flows very well. I found it wonderful and can't find anything about it that needs to be improved. ...

    Jun 3, 2011


If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them.
— Henry David Thoreau, "Walden"