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Re: Pie Rats
I really liked this poem. I enjoyed the way it was written and the humour of it. It was amazing and I can find no problems in it. Overall, I ...
Oct 18, 2011 -
Re: Suffocating
I think this poem is amazing. The punctuation really gave a great effect to the overall poem and made it much more dramatic. It was a great poem and I ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: I'm sure
I found this poem excellent. It flows quite nicely and is well written. I can't find anything in this poem that could be improved. You did a wonderful job.
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: with out you
Wow. That is very beautifully written. The wording is amazing and it flows very well. I found it wonderful and can't find anything about it that needs to be improved. ...
Jun 3, 2011
