BrokenWings

thanks or the review ill try to fix it and yea the "til your legs start to bleed" line is meant metaphorically =]

thanks =] i edited it...i think

noooooooo jacob black is MINE! stupid renesmee... haha just joking =] This was really great and i really enjoyed it. keep up the great work! :D

thank you very much! and yes the fifth stanza was intentional =]

thank you =]

thanks! ill try to fix it as best as i can

thanks =]

Thanks for the critiques! :) i kind of changed the ending because I didnt like it very much before. Not that i like it any better now... and no. im ...