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BrokenLeighR

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    I like the way you wrote it but to me it just doesn't quite flow. I read it over again and I didn't notice a rhyming pattern or a scheme. ...

    Oct 19, 2011


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein